Searria H.

Hi, Noelle! Your title was really intriguing. I usually stay away from romantic stuff, but your title drew me in. Yay! :D However, it almost felt as though the poem ...

Hey there! :smt039 Sea here as requested. :) I want to start by saying that you have a really beautiful piece here. Your descriptions are gorgeous, and they really enhance ...

Well, I couldn't recover the review. I'll try to reenact it as best I can. :) It looks like you already edited for all of the punctuation I pointed out, ...

Hi! :smt039 Sea here as promised. :D First of all, I must tell you something. *bows head seriously* Your. avvie. is. fantastic. *clears throat* That is all. We can proceed ...

Hey there guineapiggirl! (love the username, by the way) Sea here to review. I finished reading the poem, and my first thought was "What just happened?" I completely followed the ...

Hey, Auxiira! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're having a nice stay so far. :D The general idea of your poem is good. :) Your rhythm is pretty consistent, and ...

Hi there, Infinity! Sea here to review. First of all, a belated welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying yourself so far. C: Okay. I think this poem has a ...

Hi, Beck! This was a lot of fun to read. :) I really enjoyed the refreshing light-heartedness of the piece. I'm amazed at how well-developed your characters were in such ...

Hi there! Sea here for a review. :) So, I'm doing cartwheels in my head because I noticed very few, if any technical errors. You deserve an elephant. :elephant: I ...

Hi there, Renlover! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you've been enjoying yourself so far. :) Just a friendly reminder to help out your fellow writers by reviewing. ...

Hey there! Here to review. I found this poem really intriguing. I read it several times, and found something different each time. Nice. :) This first thing I notice is ...

Hello there, TYLENOL! Sea here to review. Before I get started, just a quick friendly reminder to help out your fellow writers by reviewing their work. I think you'll find ...

Hey there, Deadman! Couple things to get out of the way before I go into the review: 1) Nice avvie. :) 2) I spent a good two minutes saying "Zarareth" ...

Hey there, MillarS! Sea here to review. :) I think this piece had a very nice overall flow. I didn't have too many jolting moments of confusing or subject change. ...

Hey there, musicgirl! Sea here to review. :) I did read your first chapter, but it seemed like you already had several comments, so I thought I could better help ...